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Dont read inbetween the lines
its right infront of you
the hurt and the hate and lies
right there to see
when reading a book
you see fake life
but while looking out the window
you cant see the real thing
read life and you'll know
all the pain that it causes
read life and youll know
whom it hurts
i never thought LIFE
could happen to me
but i did hate
and i did lie its a desiese
But i can read life
and i control my life
i have been cured
of the real life
©2008-2009 ~tigergurl5
:icontigergurl5:

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this is a poem i wrote about 4 years ago in a car. i don't like it but if you do please let me know

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:iconyoungpoets:
It certainly has a good insight into what life is and what it can do to people.
You have some misspellings. You should fix them :]

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:iconjet-set-radio:
Very nice.

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You may worry about what tomorrow will bring, but that's just a little flaw in life. Worry. Me? I don't care for tomorrow all that much. I like today, personally.
:icontigergurl5:
Thanx

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Ignorance is bliss and Bliss ignorance

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June 26, 2008
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